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What do you think of this first chapter?
I write my first fiction harry potter fan and this is the beginning of the first chapter. That do you think of him? is it good or should I start over? How can I improve it? tips on expanding on it? you not need to know something about Harry Potter to really understand, it's just like an intro. thank you. incase you do not know: Beauxbatons, another school of magic France Giant Dipper roller coaster-historic Belmont Park in San Diego in Mission Beach Hogwarts school of magic that Harry Potter Whomping Willow attends tree-violent moves and smashes things with him the giant Braches https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pCJmkkxs87u2vP7IRbBt6isObeRjZa6mQWKY36ZkAP0/edit?hl=en
This It's really, really good. As ridiculously well written! It already feels like a real book published and I could hardly stop playing. Definitely go ahead and do it again! I love it! moonlightwriter xoxo
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